Disputatio:Dies Libertatis (Civitates Foederatae Americae)

Bad article - improvements?

I made this article and it sucks. According to IacobusAmor the words are Latin but not the grammar - so, what can be done to fix it? Also, where can a source be found to properly name "independence day" in Latin? It is hard to find anything. I'd appreciate any help. P0tato112 (disputatio) 04:19, 3 Septembris 2022 (UTC)

Vide "Declaratio Libertatis Civitatum Foederatarum Americae." IacobusAmor (disputatio) 12:34, 3 Septembris 2022 (UTC)

Improved article

I have renamed and moved this article, and also tried to improve on the grammar in the part that was "dubious". The new name is in Classical Latin now. However, it no doubt is still imperfect, and I would appreciate any help with improvements again. If the quality really has improved, perhaps it can be linked to the Declaratio Libertatis Civitatum Americae Foederatarum page to have a link to another page. P0tato112 (disputatio) 05:17, 6 Septembris 2022 (UTC)